Lately the phrase "get money" has been gaining popularity. You here it in songs, you see it on shirts, and you hear people saying all the time, " I get money."
Well as many may have noticed the economy isnt doing too hot right now, and the slow done in the money deparment is really hitting close to home in the duval county school system. Electives are getting cut, some classes dont have desk, some are using dated textook that have seen better days, and finally ask anyone and they will tell you teachers should get paid way more than they do.
But what can we do!? Well Mr. Burton said that "some business will sponser the school in exchange for advertisemnts, Especially if you go to a business owned a by a T.P. alumni." To sell advertisemnts talk to some of your elective teachers or and get the right forms.
To improve T.P. its going to take a combined effort from the whole community.
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I honestly think that the students here could care less about what amount of money the school recieves.
I disagree with gotpho, I think kids do care. What can you put in here to get them to? make sure you attribute the quote. A quote from an interview with an adminstrator would be good.
You seem to have a few punctuation and grammar errors to clean up. I think that more people than you think care about our school budget, and an explation for why we're so poor is a must. Add in an interview with an admin or 2, and for those who don't care about our money problem, find a way to give them a reason to care in your article.
OK YOU NEED TO REREAD THIS ARTICLE AND CHECK THE SPELLING AND GRAMMAR. YOU ALSO NEED TO GET OTHER PEOPLES OPINIONS BUT ITS GOOD
interesting. and i agree
It's short, but it needs to be made of short paragraphs, not one big block.
You might want to re-read this article and check some spelling. That's all. *smiles*
this is a good idea. i think you should get a few administrations point of view and see what they have to say about the problem.
some grammer erros like
here change to hear
and add an s to the end of desk
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